Off the top of my head

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Daniel Herring, May 18, 2006.

  1. Daniel Herring

    Daniel Herring Member

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    Off the top of my head,
    A thing did fall,
    A tiny voice so sweet and small,
    It spoke to no one, spoke to all,
    A whisper, a warning, a clarion call.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Well, it's a start. lol

    I mean, you could really develop this more, sounds more like the beginning of something.

    Still, I like it.
     
  3. stalk

    stalk Banned

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  4. Daniel Herring

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    Thanks TBTM, it was only an exercise in spontaneity: literally 'off the top of my head'; accomplished in under five minutes (I write slowly). Glad you liked it. By all means, if you think it deserves it, add something - or, just rip off one of your own.

    :)

    Thanks Stalk, I looked at the site but didn't get much out of it. Do you mean quatrains as in Nostradamus?
     
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