hello, would like to share some of my recent works.

new to finally getting something down on paper. looking for suggestions, criticism. please see more about me at www.myspace.com/m0nty thank you very much.

UPDATE
now I KNOW I'm living a lie. Predicated effect symbolically dictates assumed identity. Effect of future present disdains temporary indecision. Figurines aplenty decorate a cone of glossy finish. It's as if you turn the world upside down and objects swirl colors unfurl and the light is sliced apart. Specific beams of thought splash shadow on the wall of your fears, inconclusive and adjecent. I have personally built a fortress of infinite solitude bent upon licking sweat from the balls of existence. Traveling far and away to ingest the ancient mechanics of civilizations long ago lost and undocumented in the history of our time, annals of rituals and procedures ignored and stifled, beset by fears of rediscovery and lo! application to our present mindset(s). Inhalation of black dragon's breath summons the simplicity of existence, lacks specificity in endangering our own predilection. An ancient unlocking of the gates breeding subservience and monotony. Fuck, it's not even me writing these words when you become so skilled at summoning secretions thought lost long ago. Fools abound and the ignorant collide in a massive display of starburst echoing across time and space, space and time, drawing an interest that provides a framework for your fate. Inhibitions be damned as you flex your fragments of muscle, you'll never seek death, never sense loss and provide only a base level of groundwork, a cornerstone or edifice indestructible by conventional standards. Why I put up with so much is both a mystery and motivator to continue nurturing the desire to transcend. Effects and illusions, smoke and mirrors do hereby declare that to withstand pressure of this magnitude, there be helping hands to soothe and comfort. thank you all for breathing the pollution you call your lives.


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ASTROLIGHT

astrological alignments remind time it's all behind inside your mind. beings far removed from earth planes play to stay and remain tame seeing the pain. consciousness of mankind they find as a line so fine far less kind to share or care prepare for a carnival attraction house of mirror erase fear hold it so dear creates a tear......

veteran regret again pent up within violent pilot reacting and contracting heart muscle blood corpuscle a cement vessel to carry your ashes lightning flashes water dashes flowing mighty fury of waves for days all land all life all green all red all yellow all white all silver all bright tonight only stars remain glitter twinkle glisten shine waiting to find the womb your tomb alone n

my bedroom shaking in sweat feeling regret to beget a pathetic metric affect the balance that isnt that wasnt that cant be for me when i see backwards and beyond long its so wrong pass along bad eyes and lies contribute to my demise comprise rhapsodize while it dies so funny so great so good so long so lost to have such a cost......

you wear a crown permanent frown bring everyone down every day in every way trying to say what a mess to posess and caress frequently alter and adjust to lust make such a fuss when all you need is harmony it's a part of me a part to see, to be feel that it is real repeal any restrictions constrictions predictions convictions afflictions when its time to heal and reveal you CAN feel its a real deal......

mirrors and smoke deceptions a joke remove the yoke around your neck to connect and help protect our respect to commandeer infinite destiny wisdom balance growth life, with less strife under the knife think twice about being real nice when you roll the dice and gamble a dream when you want to scream and remain mean....

astonishment admonishment response accomplish finish splint the pinch help convince the list not your fist never missed and kissed. where we come up missing at look at that where we get it at how im the rat.