Sense the Nearness

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Daniel Herring, May 14, 2006.

  1. Daniel Herring

    Daniel Herring Member

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    I’m a twisted mass of broken dreams;
    hand held out and up,
    a spiritual street urchin peering up through ratty hair
    sensing the nearness of my savior.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I like the metaphor/image of the "spiritual street urchin"
     
  3. Daniel Herring

    Daniel Herring Member

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    Me too. Thanks.
     
  4. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    I'll save you alright! I'll wash your damn hair!

    :)
     
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