distraction

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by kitty fabulous, Aug 3, 2004.

  1. kitty fabulous

    kitty fabulous smoked tofu

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    distraction

    there is a fingerprint
    in the upper left corner of my screen
    as i sit here and try to write to you.

    i don't know how it got there;
    it isn't mine.
    it draws my attention
    away from your letter.
    it is as if someone
    longing for touch
    had pressed their hand to my screen
    and then, faced with the reality
    of pixels and distance,
    moved it sadly away,
    leaving on the smooth impersonal glass
    the unique, intimately whorled evidence
    of their desire.

    it sits on my screen with patient insistence.
    wasn't it there the last time i tried to write to you?
    i must confess,
    its yearning is contagious,
    although distracting and discomforting.
    i want to wipe it from my screen
    so that i can get on with your letter,
    yet in so doing, i acknowledge the desire
    to return its waiting touch,
    to caress it away,
    to stroke it lovingly with windex and tissue.

    my eyes keep straying
    to it, as i struggle
    to write, to find words
    to reach out to you,
    draw your attention
    as effectively as that fingerprint
    causes mine to drift.
     
  2. Razor Face

    Razor Face Member

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    Great poem. I think in five years, it's the first love poem that had I've read that included a net/comp reference in an image that will stick. I loved it.
     
  3. Razor Face

    Razor Face Member

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    The poetry in forums is pretty good.
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Interesting idea!
     
  5. green_thumb

    green_thumb kill your T.V.

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    Nice, I enjoyed this.
     
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