another one (untitled at the moment)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by moonlight phoenix, May 7, 2006.

  1. moonlight phoenix

    moonlight phoenix Member

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    Solid as a rock I sit beneath a tree
    Feeling the fabric of existence move from under my feet
    Salamander sand slips between my fingers
    Slipping through the slits of what has once been
    Flashing lights shine a certian force right up my neck
    Fascination with exploration and expiry dates
    Where does the future end and the past begin?
    Which way is right and which way is left?
    I've got no directions on this map of mine.
     
  2. crummyrummy

    crummyrummy Brew Your Own Beer Lifetime Supporter

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    I like the no directions line.
     
  3. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    What about an omnidirectional map?
    (mind)
     
  4. janedoe

    janedoe Member

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    I like this one too..."Fascination with exploration and expiry dates" ~ this one is very peaceful to me, like I'm traveling into the unknown and I shouldn't worry too much and just enjoy it.
     
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