Beneath the woods with you

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jack Straw, May 8, 2006.

  1. Jack Straw

    Jack Straw Member

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    Among the gaping willow trees
    And quiet natural themes
    I seek my refuge in this land
    To forever and ever be

    In the woods I calmly lay
    With content and introspection
    I’ve lost an interest in the life
    That’s claimed many a person

    Many a person who’s lost touch
    With Earth’s most valuable riches
    Instead they value cars and money
    Time to make new homes and niches

    And so I elope with the woods
    Singing soft melodies
    While others make their way to work
    I shall be dancing among trees.

    And when the diggers do come
    Looking for ancient clues
    I hope they’ll find my antique bones
    Beneath the woods with you.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    This is one of your finest so far, Jack, I really dig what you're saying. The ending was perfect, too. :)
     
  3. Jack Straw

    Jack Straw Member

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    thanks trippinbtm, I loved this one as well. I've been writing a lot of nature themed poems as of late
     
  4. dietcoketree

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    i love this one. it makes me want to go lay outside under a tree RIGHT NOW!!
     
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