Airwalk

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by stalk, May 5, 2006.

  1. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    Fruit flies masturbate with
    their noses.
    They appear to me as a network of
    sister stars,
    all cloud-like in fast forward (FF).
    Catching the rift of the other flies,
    the bug orbits around another one
    with wings so marrily,
    marily, marily-
    O memories
    corrupt like files on
    my hard drive.

    It's come to the point now
    when I look outward on Earth,
    Up, If you will,
    There are so many pixels
    of particles absorbing into my eyes,
    just a moment enough for them to be sensed.
    Inbetween my five-pointed body
    and the star I'm meditating on
    (It must be a planet,
    the sun hasn't even set..)
    there are only my eyes himself,
    and the ever so surreal
    fruit fly shuffle dance----
    Another human identifies me.

    Vocalizes a pattern,
    my name.

    My name. I see her waving,
    accross the park, near the swings.
    This isn't gravity but I get up
    and go orbit around
    another one with wings.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    man i really like how you tied that back to the beginning. And I really dig the images and...i dunno, your style i guess. This is a gem.
     
  3. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    thanks man,
    I've got to ramble ;)
    And I try to most eloquently
    and psychedelic,
    experimental-whatever,
    Most of my poetry is about my trips,
    or my observations, thoughts,
    modulated for
    kicks, Or something.

    Thank you for the feedback, my friend.
     
  4. janedoe

    janedoe Member

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    That's sweet, I like. The vivid imagery and laid back style is very inspirational. Thanks for sharing.
     
  5. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    you're welcome,
    thanks for acknowledging my laid back stylee ;]
     
  6. janedoe

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    np, looking forward to reading more ^.^
     
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