random poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by moonlight phoenix, May 2, 2006.

  1. moonlight phoenix

    moonlight phoenix Member

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    I fill myy veins with substance
    I fill my heart with emotions
    too hard to swallow
    Extreme temperatures make me dizzy
    It's all in a tizzy
    What are you doing to me?
    All this time I thought I was mine
    But all along I was just on borrowed time
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    "all this time I thought I was mine
    But all along I was just on borrowed time"

    Wow. Who's time, and to whom do you belong? To whom do we all belong, if not ourselves? In a tizzy, indeed...
     
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  4. Bhaskar

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    Perhaps it is time to be empty.
     
  5. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    One must be empty if one's been full.
     
  6. Bhaskar

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    One must be.
     
  7. stalk

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    Two must be.
     
  8. Bhaskar

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    Two must be one.
     
  9. stalk

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    Two will be one :]
     
  10. Bhaskar

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    They already are.
     
  11. stalk

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    And they've always been.
     
  12. dietcoketree

    dietcoketree Member

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    um well i liekd the poem
     
  13. Bhaskar

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  14. stalk

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    Why did You like it,
    You coincidence of molecules, you?
     
  15. Bhaskar

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    We are far more than a random miscellany of matter, stalk.
     
  16. stalk

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    Whoa now,
    I didn't say "random"
    Nothing is random.
    I said Coincidence,
    And then I said molecules!

    We are whatever we believe,
    whatever we perceive,
    I like to call myself a coincidence of molecules,
    one of my favorite terms
    other than Human.
     
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