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Nostalgia

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tye_DyeBrain, Aug 2, 2004.

  1. Tye_DyeBrain

    Tye_DyeBrain Member

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    Firefly trails echoed
    Across cerulean skies
    White daisies to crown
    Little Idian Princesses
    Tiptoeing through the forest
    Leaves crunching under our feet
    The air smells of autumn
    Of dusty oak leaves
    Pumpkin pie and rose petals
    Too far from home
    But no one will ever know
    The thrill causing difficulty
    To exhale
    Redleaves scatter and
    Fall over the grassy bank
    Into the black water
    Producing infinite circles
    Pressing onward
    Dodging tree branches
    Over the moss covered stones
    Implanted in the creek
    They've been polished
    Over time
    Slipping into the icy water
    Skin pierced by
    A pool of needles
    Struggling upwards
    Onto dry land
    Soaked and chilled yet
    Giggling in complete ecstasy
    despite scratched blbows
    And bruised knees
    Twilight soon approaches
    Our only indication
    The fading sunlight
    Between tree branches
    Hurrying home
    IN our yellowed sneakers
    The breeze reddening
    Perfect porcelain cheeks
    Yet to have been robbed
    By time
     
    Tye_DyeBrain, Aug 2, 2004
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  3. Nalencer

    Nalencer Dig Yourself

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    i like it. i cant offer too much to you, but it was nice, keep trying
     
    Nalencer, Aug 2, 2004
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  5. hipeeee

    hipeeee Member

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    i thought it was quite butiful in time u might have published works :)
     
    hipeeee, Aug 2, 2004
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  7. Tye_DyeBrain

    Tye_DyeBrain Member

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    Thanks for the feedback guys!:) Its always nice to hear what other people think

    Peace n` Love
     
    Tye_DyeBrain, Aug 2, 2004
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