friendship cycle

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by anniesandwhich, Aug 1, 2004.

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    * i'd really appreciate some feedback. thanks!


    i am strong but they make me weak
    i have a voice but they won't listen
    where do i turn if not to them?
    should i stay of should i go?
    can we work it out?
    i wish they could see who i am and love me anyway
    i wish this wasn't a competition
    i wish we were equal.
    i want to scream at them, make them listen to me
    but i can think of what to say
    they are alway right, i don't stand a chance.
    its hard to remember the good times when all they do is shut me out.
    can we have a future or do we reside in the past?
     

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