Youth's desire

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marquis_de_odde, Apr 18, 2006.

  1. marquis_de_odde

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    This is a bit rough round the edges,just kind of jotted it down in the last hour, any opinions would be appreciated.


    Youth's Desire

    Sam walked into an old mortar bricked building
    Looking around at the wall to wall shelving
    On each level were hundreds of jars and vials
    Yellowed shoe boxes with indesciperable scribbles
    The air was pugent with a sharp rustic aroma
    A mix between patchouli and damp leaves
    Acrid grey smoke stung his eyes
    He felt as if he'd been transported into another world
    Lost so deep in a yearning for comprehension
    He jumped when a voice called out
    Rough and road weary it croaked

    "Uppers,downers,coke and speed
    You've got the itch,I'll fill your need
    To walk away from chalk white thought
    It takes my tricks,you need the lot
    Hash and meth,crystal love
    Pure tears from a dying dove
    Smoke these herbs,you'll shoot away
    And roam around for days and days
    Eat a bit of this and that
    Rounds up all you thought was flat
    Needles space through a sieve
    The camel's eye has much to give
    Your face will turn kalidescope
    As you slide down a gilded rope
    Not convinced yet I'm the best?
    Simply put me to the test
    If what you seek I don't posess
    I'll mix it up,I must confess
    None can top my cosmic ring
    That's why I'm called the Disco King"

    The words came on fast like grenades
    Pentetrating the young buyer's defences
    He'd been feeling very mentally dehydrated recently
    And recieved news of this shop only days before
    From a friend of a friend of a friend of a friend
    After a long marijuana induced confession
    In which he stated
    "I feel as though I've been walking forever
    Down an staircase built on deceit
    Now I've hit the last step
    There's nothing remaining and I don't know what to do"

    Now he was standing before a stocky african man
    With salt and pepper hair that wildly protested gravity
    His speech had got him spinning like a top
    And he seemed electrified as he jumped about from shelf to shelf
    With a purposefull intent
    That seemed to suggest he knew exactly what he was looking for
    Even if his young customer didn't
    As he came to a small brown box
    Tied up in weedy tan twine
    He took in a breath like it was his first in weeks
    And started off again,this time more erratic
    Coming to the peak of some mystic cataclysm

    "Here's the thing you most desire
    Proved to set your head on fire
    A funny weed,in shade it grows
    From where it came I do not know
    Take three leaves and chew them full
    Then spit it out into my bowl
    I'll mix with that sweet salty tears
    From a duke who cried for forty years
    Over what was not known even to him
    As peasants met his every whim
    We too must throw six drops of blood
    From a virgin girl who drowned in mud
    It wasn't deep and she could've emerged
    But her fixation on help lead instead to a dirge
    Also a feather straight from the cap
    Of a rather ruthless and selfish young chap
    His mind became twisted as guilt smashed it to bits
    Now he can't make a sound,in silence he sits
    Dreaming in agony he'd come back on top
    Catatonic creation halting full stop
    One more thing is needed to make it complete
    Rare raw pure and simple,soon quite obselete
    The lashes of a lady who trusted too much
    And blindly her person was up for the touch
    Of all that came to her claiming the truth
    So tragic life ended believing in sooth
    The person who did it was terribley vile
    Though she ignored the venom seeping down from his smile
    He met her head on and pulled out a dagger
    'I love you' she screamed,in her life's final swagger
    When it is finished and you take it again
    You'll learn of the failings residing in men
    See their mistakes as if they were yours
    Never have need to walk through those doors
    Though it seems inconceivable this is not why you came
    I give you a choice,have I figured your game?
    It's only to aid in quelling neglect
    Of logical thought too soon we reject
    In searching for something we know can't be right
    Stopping a struggle we all strive to fight
    So will you accept my synthesized strain
    To ease the frustration of self disdain?"

    The young man stood very quite for a moment
    He thought of everything and nothing simutaneously
    With very wide and catious eyes he blinked at the Disco King
    After clearing his throat he said in almost a whisper
    "I think there's been a misunderstanding
    I was looking for the book shop
    I need to find a book on dog training"

    As he walked out he lit up a cigarette
    The cold attumn breeze hit his face
    He leaned over to the street and got violently ill
     
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