The fruit of Twist (For Pat Halloren) By Charlie Bessette

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by StinkyGreen4me, Jul 30, 2004.

  1. StinkyGreen4me

    StinkyGreen4me Member

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    There was a yard sale today,
    my fingers greww rather strange-
    I found out one of my friends was fucked!
    He is abusing heroin,
    or so I am too Believe.
    Ok Pat Halloren is his name, big deal.
    But what the fuck?
    what has been in the stars the last two years of my
    solitary life?- like gardening and pulling the plants,
    weeding;Rita (Wet foot)
    Sorry it's just been too long.
     
    StinkyGreen4me, Jul 30, 2004
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  3. Tye_DyeBrain

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    I think its rad how you always seem to incorparte people you know in your poetry! rock on Charlie :)
     
    Tye_DyeBrain, Jul 30, 2004
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  5. tripRBYday

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    It's interesting but use more of a constant rythm, poetry is music.
     
    tripRBYday, Jul 30, 2004
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