i hope.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dietcoketree, Mar 30, 2006.

  1. dietcoketree

    dietcoketree Member

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    someday i hope you look back at everything we had and smile.
    not a smile with your face, but with your heart. i hope your heart feels a burning of wishing and hoping.
    i hope you wonder about all of the things we could have been.
    i hope you wonder how i am, and i hope you try to cal lmy old number only to find that ive been gone for years.
    and then i hope that you feel a loss.

    but above all, i hope you remember that once upon a time, i was your life; your heart; your LOVE. i hope you remember the smell of my hair and the way i looked at you when you were at a loss for words. i hope you remember those nights starring up at the stars, and the days we gave up life to be in eachothers arms.
     
  2. sararoxmysox92

    sararoxmysox92 Member

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    What a great poem.


    " i hope you try to cal lmy old number only to find that ive been gone for years.
    and then i hope that you feel a loss." I love that. it has a great feel to it.
     
  3. sunshine and pearls

    sunshine and pearls Member

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    very truthful keep writing.
     
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