Little Plant

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  1. SvgGrdnBeauty

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    Little Plant

    Little plant you have grown
    All winter long by the wetness of my tears
    The spring manifested itself in nature
    Of the world and my heart
    Stillness--
    When did you get so beautiful, little plant?
    Born in happiness, grown by the tears of sadness
    Your beauty now thrives in a blissful heart
    As you have grown throughout the darkest days
    So have I
    Together, little plant, we are new and beautiful
    As the spring sunlight which revealed us to the world
    Pray it never leaves.
     
  2. EternalHunter

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    "Little plant you have grown
    All winter long by the wetness of my tears"

    These are absolutely percfect lines.
     
  3. make art not war

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    This is unique...I've never read anything like it. I think it's awesome.
     
  4. SvgGrdnBeauty

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    Thank you both for your kind comments...
     
  5. sunshine and pearls

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    great poem with wonderful imagery i simply love the first two lines of this poem. the poem also flows very well great work. keep it up.
     
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