THE TRUTH SHALL SET YOU FREE Impale my jaded heart, Take the beat apart. It’s not the stanza or the hook, And it’s probably not written in you’re book. No holy god or savior’s son, This is the final lie and it’s begun. You want to commit suicide, Because you’re mother died, And you’re father’s always drunk, You can see yourself dying cause of him, This story may be awful but it’s just about to begin. The one about you’re life, The one you’ll never win. They say ‘Bleeding Hearts Shed No Tears’, And when Jesus died God dressed in black. THE LAST SUICIDE NOTE You left me mom, like the moon to the sun, I waited for the daylight but it never came, Like you always do, always leaving me in the dust, But this time my tears make up this mud, Soaked in salt but made mostly of blood. You killed me dad, like white on black, I know you’ll beg but I’ll never take you back, See you’ve read this now and I’m finally free, Now that I’m dead I can truly be me, I hope that this was a lesson and you learnt how to see.
I have never read anything so dark before. Something about this poem reminded me of my own life which I suppose all good poetry does. The images in the poem are so strong and make it really come alive. Peace.
it reminds me a lot of my own life, but do you talk to your dad about any of this stuff? i know how tough it is, i hated my dad for a long time and my mom for a longer time until she passed, and now i'm just beginning to you know, forgive and move on... which is really the only way you're going to be happy ... is by moving on... talk to your dad, if you need help go get some counseling althoughi think the big thing is time to learn all ofthis stuff on your own... but you know, when it comes down to it noone can really affect your life as much as you can so i know how hard it is but you jsut gotta make the best of it... you can pm me if need be, sounds like we have a lot in common and i like to help anyone i can because i screwed up my life for a couple years because of it and i'd like to help prevent that happening to other people
