The ponderer.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by useless poet, Mar 10, 2006.

  1. useless poet

    useless poet Member

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    In the middle of a desert.
    A man sits upon a chair.
    He sits all alone.
    No one else there.
    He sits quietly pondering.
    While silently wondering.
    Why the people of the world.
    For each other.
    No longer care.
    I guess he is still there.
    In the middle of that desert.
    Still sat upon that chair.
    Quietly pondering.
    Silently wondering.
    But then again.
    Who really cares.



    Copyright useless poet 2006.
     
  2. nananie

    nananie Member

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    i think he's going to stay there a while... well it's figurative but i think it's confrontating aswell
     
  3. OceanStar

    OceanStar Member

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    Oh I really like this. It's the kind of poem I wish I could write. It's simple yet brilliant! :)



    *Peace*
     
  4. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    May he weep. And may his tears irrigate the desert, that it may flower, or become in time the Sea. :)
     
  5. useless poet

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    Thank you all for reading it and replying,just glad you liked it.
     
  6. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Well done, very moving.
     

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