Songs I wrote

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by adriana, Mar 7, 2006.

  1. adriana

    adriana Member

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    The thought on you


    Feel so caught up in everything that concerns u. At nite I can´t sleep, still think on you, bereft and alone liein there. So where´re you goin? Is it her, you´re missin now, is it her you´re wantin now?

    CHORUS:
    I can´t sleep, I can´t deny,
    It´s runnin through my head
    huntin me, cuttin my breath, infestin my life
    I can´t yell, I can´t forget
    Can´t chuck away,
    no can´t chase away the thought on you

    Within I´m cryin. But pretendin I don´t care, I don´t mind. Try to catch your looks, try to touch you deep inside. But I know, but I see that she´s the one on you mind, the one in your heart. There´s no place left for me..

    And I´m running, but don´t get away from you. Just drifting around pointlessly, close my eyes and you bring me to heel, can´t handle it. Try to yell, but it´s strangling me. Try to catch breath, but I´m scorching. And you turn round, leaving again, leaving to be with her..

    I can´t sleep, I can´t deny,
    It´s runnin through my head
    huntin me, cuttin my breath, infestin my life
    I can´t yell, I can´t forget
    Can´t chuck away,
    no can´t chase away the thought on you
     
  2. dietcoketree

    dietcoketree Member

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    this is a pretty and haunting song. i like it very much. i also write songs, and i see a bit of my style in you. :) id love to read more.
     
  3. adriana

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    Over

    Every single breath I take let me know you aren´t by my side anymore. And all the things I wished to tell you, disappear. No one who can explain me what has happend. The love I gave to you - you even pushed it away. Far away from where we used to be.

    CHORUS:
    Sorry is written on your face
    Seeing pity in your eyes.
    Words are missing, you are removing, it´s over
    Gotta turn around, gotta leave it all behind
    Gonna cry a last time, gonna wish you a better life.
    Cause it´s over

    There´s no need to apologize. Nothing left what is worth to be fixed up. Try to smile, so that I don´t have to cry. Still want to preserve my dignity. But the pain tears me up. All the years I spend on loving you. All the nites I thought on you. Nothing has remained. Woke up of this illusion.

    Hear you saying, you´re not the same man I used to know. Time has changed you. But tell me why, why my love is still there? Why, why my love didn´t change?

    Sorry is written on your face
    Seeing pity in your eyes.
    Words are missing, you are removing, it´s over
    Gotta turn around, gotta leave it all behind
    Gonna cry a last time, gonna wish you a better life.
    Cause it´s over
     
  4. adriana

    adriana Member

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    Thanks for your positiv reponse, I´m really glad that your like my song.. here´s another one, hope you like it too..
    p.s. would be great to read one of your songs.. bye
     
  5. adriana

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    Wondering where all my good intentions are disappeared, I let go off and they just got lost into your smile..
    But I still try to act real tough, though I know I can´t get through it
    Praying silently you won´t come to close to me, won´t move your lips that way..
    but you do, and God just ain´t listening to me, he´s surely too fascinated by watching you...
    you sweet angel, you damned angel..

    You don´t have to touch me
    your presence is already delighting me
    and it makes me crazy, you´re not paying enough attention to me
    try to act real cool, but behave like a fool
    so why don´t you stop making me seem so odd

    you damned angel

    I´m German, thus my English isn´t perfect, it would be nice, if someone could please correct my mistakes.. thanks
     
  6. adriana

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    Once I had faith
    but not the same strength
    Once I believed
    not just in God, but in love
    Now I got me and my life
    knowing nothing else is worth

    I was defeated
    when I felt invincible
    I was defeated
    by the one I trust most
    And He took what I loved so much

    Crying my tears with the scent of incense
    Wondering why when I know there´s no reason
    Standing there hearing the ocean and seeing the cross
    everything that has left
    Praying to God, the one I blame

    Pictures I can´t shake off, so stuck with all these emotions
    and the infinite injustice

    Nothing but emptiness around me,
    no chance to improve the situation
    lost heart, lost soul, everything
    where there´s no life there´s no hope
     

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