FIXED abstract sort of odd fingerpainting thing..but still not done..NEED HELP!

I fixed that other one I did, and now I can't figure out what to do with this to make it look....done?
Idunno..Ijust feel like it needs something else..​

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and i can't think of anything else to do without making it look crowded and crappy..
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so i'm looking to you for..inspiration​

 

make there few butterflies from paper or some another material.. like hmm.. 3d.. and colourful.. flying..

 

Oh weird, I thought it was done
and that the thought behind it was something that goes on--which could explain the it is not done yet feeling...

 

extend the dots right to the corner so they almost fade out of site

 

i think i'm gona do a doorway

 

it looks a lot better. =)

 

wonder where you got that idea

 

m brain shut upp coughdrop

 

I like it so much! Post a picture when you finish it

 

the dots look like they're moving to or away from something... an army, or a feeling, emotions, light, bubbles floating on the wind..... doorway sounds good, but i wouldn't mind seeing something more odd there... unexpected, like a tank!............i'm serious though.

 

how about a rectangle up top to balance the activity

 

much better. i like it like that.

 

i think that looks like a box of cereal...:&

 

haha, yeah she just needs to put a logo in that rectangle

 

Micha-o's
Guaranteed to start yo day off right.

 

close your eyes, take the first color in your neighbourhood and paint on it what you feel and let it become not so fixed. I like it, but for some reason you seem to get stucked in a search for balance in the work. It seems to be based on thinking instead of working, if you throw away your thoughts and decide to finish it in 10 min. without thinking this might become a great work, since its already in the painting itself.

 

the flowers have no stalks....

 

Don't let everything become so tight where one brushstroke will make or break the painting.

 

i think the doorway idea is good...right where your cicles end, like they are coming through the doorway.


*shrug* it looks good the way it is though. I love the retro circles. great work!