many moons ago i gave my heart to a man

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fabioula, Mar 1, 2006.

  1. fabioula

    fabioula Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

    Messages:
    91
    Likes Received:
    0
    many moons ago i gave my heart to a man.from that moment on it was like we where poisitioned on quicksand.searched the world all over but there is only one you in this land.your eyes how decietful i thought they only sparled like that for me?or was i just so blinded by your rapture that i could no longer see?my soul cries out from its depths,but i know i have to let you be.aspainful as your love is i just cant seem to set myself free.what is your seceret to stealing hearts and emotions?leaving your lover dazed in the dark without as much as a notion.although outsiders call her silly her heart is still full of undying devotion.splashing and breaking her heart as if i was the tide and you where the ocean....................many moons ago i unconditionally gave my heart to a man.
     
  2. rg paddler

    rg paddler Senior Member

    Messages:
    2,051
    Likes Received:
    8
    fabioula - I am sensing alot of rhythm in your poetry.Have you put any of these to music?
     
  3. fabioula

    fabioula Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

    Messages:
    91
    Likes Received:
    0
    somtimes but only the music that i play in my head your the first person to notice that though thanks!
     

Share This Page

  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice