a lapse into planes....

this is all i have so far..im still finishing it

sitting
in my zen garden
my mind was so high
i lapsed into nothing certain
(other than that clear curtain)
my stumble into the plane
made a vortex of my brain
the things i saw
or perhaps did not
came to greet me
or left me alone
there were colours not colour
living with no life
no death apparant
no day or night
creatures i'd never seen
yet know them by name
witnessed my ascension
as if a stain
then as if an eruption
that's no description
my body was naught
my existence indecision

 

I dig it.

 

Thats good grammar that is and highly imaginative.Paints pictures

 

fly you are one of the greats.felt like i was on a glorious zen journey with you

 

That is really some incredible stuff you've got there bro. Post the rest when you finish it, i'm very interested.

 

thanks all of you. i really appreciate the comments and compliments. ill post the rest when i finish it. thanks again!