your hand on my face

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fabioula, Feb 27, 2006.

  1. fabioula

    fabioula Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    i held my face on the same spot your hand had just struck it.i tried to shake it off like he loves me ,oh well just fuck it.see nobody every loved me so in my mind this is what life should be.him slowly beating out the fire in me.to him im a possesion,a geisha girl a the best.,but if we continue on this way will there be any part of me left..im tired of fighting, i came out of the womb with my hands balled in a fist.i only wanted to be the first not the last on his list..how can you hit me and then claim to love me,but then love is just a word.i gazed deeply into the mirror at my face ,and thought is this truly what i deserve .so know im regaining me back and putting love on reserve.
     
  2. Hippygurl2005

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    i like it fab, not so much the beginning but i love the end... :)
     
  3. fylthevoyd

    fylthevoyd Super Moderator

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    once again fab....you came from deep with-in...to pull these words out.....good expression ....keep on keepin on
     
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