Mom

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by GypsyPriestess, Feb 27, 2006.

  1. GypsyPriestess

    GypsyPriestess Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Bleeding

    The knife in my hand is your hatred

    A bitter blade thrust into my skin

    I want to kill you

    I want to die

    Slice the skin and let it out

    All the years of you

    Telling me over and over how worthless I am

    I hate you

    Blood on my hands

    Its mine not yours

    Damn it all

    Do you see it in my face

    My rage

    My pain

    Does it show when you look at me

    Or do you see only the worthless little shit

    You so often called me

    Am I to you now a nightmare

    Do you fear me as I feared you for years

    Or am I still of less importance to you

    Than the gum you scrape off your shoe at the end of the day

    Damn you

    Words can cut me

    Far deeper that this knife

    Words will kill me faster than loss of blood

    Could ever do

    Your words

    Every time I think I may have made you understand

    You turn your back on me again

    All I ever wanted

    Was your love

    But you had nothing to give me

    All I ever needed was your approval

    But I got your scorn, your ridicule, your malice

    Now it’s cut into my skin

    The memory of how little you think of me

    Carved into the flesh you so often maligned:

    MOM

     
  2. fabioula

    fabioula Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    sounds like something that iwuold say.the truth is liberation..thats why i like this one s o much its liked you have me there with you feeling the same emotion
     
  3. dietcoketree

    dietcoketree Member

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    o man, nice.
     
  4. tye

    tye Member

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    i thought this was going to be a love poem.
     
  5. Hippygurl2005

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    awww i love that poem, it's sad and i can tell that u are very upset :)
    but i love it keep writing more! :p
     

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