A Story Unfolding...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Feb 27, 2006.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    the Hand of the Sentient Sprit spills vocabulary from the finger tips.
    Spinning sifting, insisting resisting, straight from the hip.

    Infinite Mother asks of us all, to surrender and give in to the call.
    Onward expressions of unimaginable gratitude, begging for guidance
    at the bottom of the stairs.

    Two years past is still right now, punctured through the skin of an
    illusory wall. Never arrive, yet never depart, never contrive, and
    never fall apart...

    http://www.xanga.com/a_story_unfoLding
    I started this about 2 years ago. It was an idea for a project, that sort
    of flopped on me. Now, I'm resurecting it, and intend to keep at it.
     
  2. GypsyPriestess

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  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    A really great vibe, keep opening to the transmission.
     
  4. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Wow, thanks sylvan. Coming from you, that means alot. :)
     
  5. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    And I forgot to extend my thanks to GypsyPriestess, as well. Thank you for the comment. :)

    Also, I thought I'd mention that I took down this poem from the site. It's supposed to be sort of a "novel/poem" type thing, and I just felt all I had was a collection ofa few poems. So, I'm kind of re-writing it.
     
  6. MagnanimityMan

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    soo good =))
     
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