If my world was a canvas

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by useless poet, Feb 24, 2006.

  1. useless poet

    useless poet Member

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    If my world was a canvas.
    All stark and white.
    With out restraint.
    I would not hold back.
    Freely i would let my brush alight.
    With out any,actual care.
    Splash here.
    Daub there.
    Use a plethora of strokes.
    Attack that canvas bare.
    And paint my world.
    With such a vibrant hue.
    Like slash orange.
    Candy red.
    And maybe delphiniumn blue.
    With topaz greens.
    And cherry pink.
    I would not stop and think.
    Not really caring if i tainted.
    Any shape or form.
    Totally nonconformity.
    Thats for me.
    Let my artist soul go free.
    Just release the essence in me.
    And when i am done.
    There would be, i think.
    No one.
    Who would ever understand.
    My technicolour wonderland.
     
  2. Tiocfaidh ár Lá

    Tiocfaidh ár Lá Member

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    i like it good job

    -keep on keeping on
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Yes, excellent, another wonderful poem from you. :)
     
  4. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    Yet if they understood,
    it would do you little good;
    For quickly you'd be bored
    With such a brooding horde.

    :)
     
  5. DoyalConQueso

    DoyalConQueso Member

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    color scheme motif again. I dig it, jackson pollock. Osiris, i like the tack on
     

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