(Altar of) Seasons

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Cloudminerva, Feb 22, 2006.

  1. Cloudminerva

    Cloudminerva Member

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    These are actually the lyrics to a song. I haven't finished the music yet, but the song is slow and ambient. Without the music, the flow of the words might seem strange, but for the time being you can make of it what you will :) Enjoy!


    (Altar of) Seasons

    A distant rain is coming...
    I look deeply at everything
    Moving along on my way
    Don't know my direction for today
    I've been deep on the outside
    I Make myself at home, the breeze touches my face
    Wander to find my place

    Chorus
    Sometimes our hearts turn to stone
    And at the alter of seasons
    The wind pronounces our due course

    I see my shadow upon the ground
    And remember how I've learned from the darkness, the best teacher of the light
    I've left the chosen way, I cry
    Forgotten lessons, they dance upon my face
    Awaken the morn' restless and tired
    Causing an addiction unto yourself, a craving and a sigh
    I've seen my heaven and I've seen my hell
    No distant place to go...there already here

    Chorus
    Sometimes our hearts turn to stone
    And at the alter of seasons
    The wind pronounces our due course

    Pines swaying with the wind
    Bamboo torches alight in the night-afire
    The light of fire always reveals the shadows of the dark
    Allowing you to see your way
    Tonight, sit and relax awhile by the fire light
    Tomorrow we can move along on our way
    You've wandered on...you've found your place
    We found our direction today...
     
  2. moonlight phoenix

    moonlight phoenix Member

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    I'd love to hear this, have you finished it yet?
     
  3. Cloudminerva

    Cloudminerva Member

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    Hi. Sorry, no I haven't finished it yet. I spraing my ankle last week, and I haven't been able to move around and record like I need to be. I do have another that is finished that you might like to hear though. It's a song called "Live, Unlearn". Follow this link www.soundclick.com/minervaga

    go to the music section and you will see Live, Unlearn. I think that you will like that one if you like the words to "Seasons". Feel free to check out any of my other songs, too:) If you aren't a member of the site you can only listen to the songs in Hi Fi or Lo Fi rather than download the MP3s...(just so you know)
    Tell me what you think if you get around to it! Send me a PM or just post in this thread.

    Thanks!
    Later,
    Ben.
     
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