trip to my own death

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by stebo32, Feb 22, 2006.

  1. stebo32

    stebo32 amanita monster

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    Blue lions, red clouds, effervescing water
    A mist of spring caresses my vision,
    The trees grow tall with confusion
    In a valley where no one has ever lingered

    As I walked amongst the desert of peyote,
    A huge but tiny creature came to visit me
    "Do not eat the red and white mushrooms" he said
    As I sat and stared in his bloodshot eyes, crimson red

    I reflected upon my arrival, remembering, visiting
    "What happened to me?", trembling
    As I began to feel the vibrations of my soul,
    I finally remebered how I arrived in this desert

    I remembered my walk in the mysterious forest,
    The days Ive spent talking to my own luminous grin
    I remembered my visit with the creature of the desert
    Where in his bloody eyes I remebered dying.
     
  2. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    nice

    but i don't see what it has to do with hockey...
    :p
     
  3. stebo32

    stebo32 amanita monster

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    lollll
     
  4. fuzz_acid_flowers

    fuzz_acid_flowers Aqueou§ Transmi§§ion

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    wow phil:Dthat made me smile

    didn't know you were so talented
     
  5. stebo32

    stebo32 amanita monster

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    :) thank you fuzzy, you make me smile 2 :p
     
  6. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    so those red and white shrooms
    those are those muscaria?
    you're not gonna eat'em?
    or did you...and that's where this came from...?
     
  7. stebo32

    stebo32 amanita monster

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    oh. i have :)
    its ther weirdest trip ever... youre small but big at the same time, and theres this inner voice in your head that just wont shut up
     
  8. fuzz_acid_flowers

    fuzz_acid_flowers Aqueou§ Transmi§§ion

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    thanks darlin':)
     
  9. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    BUT is that why you wrote this poem? as you mention them in it...
     
  10. stebo32

    stebo32 amanita monster

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    yess. in the poem i supposedly ate too much amanita, and died... but went on trippin...
     
  11. stebo32

    stebo32 amanita monster

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    "I remembered my walk in the mysterious forest,
    The days Ive spent talking to my own luminous grin
    I remembered my visit with the creature of the desert
    Where in his bloody eyes I remebered dying."

    This is I remebering what happened to me.. the luminous grin, being that conscience that steps out when u take those shrooms... and the walk in the forest, where is the tripping setting.
     
  12. Cloudminerva

    Cloudminerva Member

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    Cool concept. It's like Kahlil Gibran meets Edgar Allan Poe.


    Later man,
    Ben.
     
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