this song

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by teh-horace, Feb 20, 2006.

  1. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    here's a song i'm working on currently:

    This here's a story of a little girl
    Walkin' down the road
    With a pearl necklace 'round her neck
    And then she walks further down
    The road she's on and then she sees a
    She sees a light in the road
    And she knows where she's at
    She's on her way home
    And it all becomes clear to her
    Now that she sees the light in the road
    It's safe so she goes
    And she's gone
     
  2. DoyalConQueso

    DoyalConQueso Member

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    It's hard for me to read this and not hear it all drawn out and psychedlicized like the trippier portions of The Doors' The End. It's not a bad thing to remind someone of Mr. Mojo Risen though. I'd like to hear it with the music to hear it pure you.
     
  3. Ursula Buendia

    Ursula Buendia Member

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  4. Mr_squirrel

    Mr_squirrel Member

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    i like it, kinda soft and sweet song,sounds like the kind you put on before bed or when you want to calm down.
     
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