Perfect Nature

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lucyinthesky, Jul 24, 2004.

  1. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    Perfect Nature

    In still murky waters
    The sun set between my knees.
    A voice, it whipsered in my ear,
    A shuffle stuck repeat.
    So many words river and flow
    The song of hollow heartbeat.
    Empty seeds flow from the head,
    Enough to fill my bowl.
    The sound is getting louder now
    As the water ripples below.
     
  2. Brian

    Brian Guest

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    That's pretty good.
     
  3. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    thank you :&
     
  4. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    awww, you're so talented, babe! i love all your stuff!!! raawwr :)
     
  5. Autumnwildflower

    Autumnwildflower Member

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    That was lovely
     
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