First night here, First post ever

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by DoyalConQueso, Feb 19, 2006.

  1. DoyalConQueso

    DoyalConQueso Member

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    [size=-1]It’s quiet in here,
    A welcome reprise,
    Like walking the sidewalks of
    Your neighborhood
    While everyone else lies sleeping,
    That extra time that’s solely yours,
    Made magical by the tint of moonlight
    And secret by being solitary.
    It’s quiet in here
    And words seem to be unnecessary encumbrances,
    Echoing in the emptiness,
    A pointless one-sided conversation;
    I shh them and stop the verbal translation.
    I am expansive,
    Open.
    The state is fragile;
    Don’t make me make words,
    I will answer in strange automation,
    Scary, the reflexive response;
    Mumbled words drifting from the vales of sleep.
    It is quiet in here,
    All the normal processes
    That hum to themselves all day,
    Producing desires and fears,
    Churning out observations and opinions,
    Have all been tied in together
    And are operating in harmony
    So all their reverberations are timed
    To cancel each other out
    My subconscious mind has claimed more
    Than it’s usual share of the machinery;
    It must have thought I was dreaming,
    Some signal derived from shifting brainwaves
    Caused by prolonged staring at the sky.
    A respite of thought;
    A dimming of lights upstairs
    As some huge hulking appliance in the basement
    Is plugged in and sucks up the juice
    And the ensuing darkness provides a surprising comfort.
    The boys downstairs are up to something,
    I can be sure of that;
    Whether some multifaceted creative concept
    Or a paradigm shift of outlook
    I will have to wait and see.
    All I can do for the time being is preserve
    This all too popable bubble;
    Keep my waters free of ripples
    And wipe my mirrors clean.[/size]
     
  2. DoyalConQueso

    DoyalConQueso Member

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    The dreamer’s blessing can become his curse.
    Jetlag caused by temporal anomalies;
    Living months to find minutes have passed.
    Holding experiences strange and poignant,
    Like oil, essential of life and ooze of death
    Sliding in rainbow blackness across water
    And prove as slippery when expression is attempted
    No one else will even try to understand.
    “It’s just some carbon.”
    You’re just some carbon,
    Secret triple six at the base of organics.
    The intrepid traveler of the soul
    Carries satchels full of stories
    That few have ears for
    And they can weigh him down.
    Dreamers feel their separateness
    Tainted by the touch of the other world
    Only among their fellows
    Are all the misunderstandings understood
    With sad and knowing nods.
    When one spends one’s nights sailing
    Those unmapped inner shores
    One’s waking hours can become the dream;
    Sometimes this one needs to wake up
    So this one can get some rest.
    A mare on the moon proves difficult to shed light on,
    Mares of the night are not easily broken
    And will buck their riders back into bed.
    When that sacred dreamless sleep
    That the hemlock may have held for Socrates
    Is withheld the mind can play tricks
    As borders become blurry.
    When the slings and arrows of the other world
    Strike the face or pierce the throat,
    One can wake up gasping for daylight
    And quiver alone in the darkness.
    When dreamy golden promises
    Turn to pyrite or pumice in the sun
    The waking world is found wanting
    And the stars unaligned.
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Amazing expanses of solitude,
    insightful echos rippling,
    no longer seeking a response
    from the tranquil lake.
     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    Both pieces have the total package, imagery that blossoms in the mind carrying an emotional impact with aesthetic artistry. A fine offering you've provided here, and I hope you share some more! Welcome to the forums!



    that’s what I call poetry… bravo!
     
  5. PatchWorkKid

    PatchWorkKid Member

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    U are truelly a poet. May the poems always be there to hear. From ur lips to mine. Peace&Love to u!:H :D
     
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