Sweetest of dreams

I wrote the sweetest of dreams for you.
It's for you alone to keep.
And i hope you will remember it.
Everytime you go to sleep.

So dream of a land.
Where sherbert is sand.
And trees are candy floss.
With liquorice roads.
And pink bubblegum toads.
Do swim in a cherryade foss.

And dream of a place.
Where sugar mice race.
To get to the chocolate cheese.
And everywhere,you can taste the air.
Which blows in on a peppermint breeze.

Then dream of a world.
Where caramel grass is unfurled.
To show butterscotch underneath.
With lollipop signs.
And toffee from mines.
That never rot your teeth.

 

Wow, wow...Very surreal, very visual. I really dig this one, man. Far out work!

 

Thanks citrus seas,i am quite proud of this one,i wrote with children in mind,something parents would easily remember to tell their children at bedtime,i tried to make it as dreamy as possible,i hope i have succeded.

 

thank you for sharing this with everyone i always sied you had somthink to give keep it up mum

 

that's sweet=)

 

I must say you are really good this def. takes you to another place....it kinda reminds me of starwberry fields...while reading it i totally pictured it!!!

 

I thought i'd share one of mine for valentine's sake...it's called "waiting for love"

I swear I felt your skin against mine
Love so divine
Felt skin to skin
Your body on mine
You took your time
As did I
Kissing softly and slowly
Hard tounge, soft lip
Hard and soft
Slow and fast
Love at last
Is found
Tonight two souls unite
As we become one
Love we make

Tell me what ya'll think if you would...this is the first poem i've posted

 

that's nice, foundme, i dig it.

 

Thanx i apprecaite it... you are always taking a huge step when u share poetry because it's a piece of you that people can judge... it can hurt when their not feelin it exspecially when it means something to you!

 

Hello found me,i found your poem to be very sensual,i thought it is very very good,it is good to read poetry with out big words that explains a personal experience ,simply but with deep feeling,you should post more,maybe not everybody will get the feelings behind your poetry,but take heart that, everybody is different and i am sure that their will be many who will appreciate it immensely,so keep it up.

 

Thanx useless poet..everytime I come up here I look up to your poems so that means a lot

 

So here's another one it's called "Souviner"

In Ihop he sat
With a Veteran hat
For the war he fought
And the freedom he bought
Vitenam we lost years ago
But his wheelchair shows so all will know
That now his legs have been left behind
And a war he fought bought him a hat for his time

 

I just want to say that the snoschberries taste like snoschberries.
Your land is silly and sweet.
I liked reading about it.
Good poem, man.
Good thing your teeth don't rot.

 

what a very sweet dream...

I really enjoyed the whole poem, esp the peppermint breeze.

 

wow, great poem! i loved it

 

im hungry now.... yummm

 

i have to say that your one of the better poets iv come across, do you happen to have anything published?

 

Thank you Mr Squirrel,for you views,No i do not have anything published.i am quite new to Writing poetry to show to the world,i only write what suddenly comes to me,i wrote Wiccan Girl about a year ago,it was a poem that was my first serious attempt,at trying to write something people would like,i am honestly not the best of educated people,i do not know clever big words,i am a person who tries to make simply the best with what i have inside,i hope with the the interest that people have shown ,in my poetry,that maybe it is an inspiration to others ,I love that people look out for my poetry,and i thank them all,the interest you show in me,i try to repay ,the best i can with poems to keep you interested,i hope i can brighten a least somebodys day with a few lines in this confused and frenzy world. Thank you all

 

no worrys, i really enjoy your work. i have a few things iv put on the furom, i too am kinda new to writing only started seriusly less than a yr ago, but if youd look at some of it and tell me what you think it would be apreciated.