Rivers of confusion Swim throughout my mind And I know that there are answers That I somehow need to find Sometimes I view the memories And wish to press "rewind" But blankly as I stare The button's just not there Aimlessly I wander Feeling so alone And no place that I go Seems to feel like home Peace isn't found Anywhere I roam Someone help me please To cure this dark disease And make me free again I just don't understand Why things happen the way they do I want to love again But it'd help to see you put the bottle down As I see your downward spiral It makes me wear a frown How can I move on When these feelings linger blindly They don't know where to go Like me, they can't find rest And they question which road Would be the very best Some say time will heal And I know the Lord provides Every time I close my eyes I see you by my side I can't figure out if it's right or wrong All I know is that my heart cries for you And maybe in the morning I'll wake up to something new The same old story Has been dragging out too long Isn't true love supposed to last? As I daydream another day away Every breath becomes the past
i loved your poem. i liked the comparrison of thoughts to a river that was a beautiful metaphor. righteous!
very good I really thought it was well writen and very well put to gether A+ would love to see more from you.
A really well written poem of desperation,i like it a lot,it really makes you feel sorry and sad for the person in the poem.
Thanks, you're too kind. Hopefully I will start writing more again soon. I've had writer's block for the longest time... and have been so busy for the past couple of years that my writing has been on the back burner. Writing is therapy. Writing is my best friend.
