valentine poem - 'its our nature'

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by DejaVoo, Feb 13, 2006.

  1. DejaVoo

    DejaVoo stardust

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    a garden of soft fluttering butterflies
    appear when i gaze into your eyes
    the wind blows me in your direction
    a warm springs' sun of affection
    i want to soak in your rays
    to be peacefuly tangled in your web of ways
    discovering rainbows at the end of our storms
    endless daisy pedals are always being torn
    your summers touch of snowflakes melts my shivers
    your happiness blooms wildflowers next to my river
    your smiling ocean washes up on my shore
    ill dance on your dirt until my feet are sore
    we spead our wings an fly above
    the rocky moutains that is our love

    the poem i wrote for my boyfriend for this valentines, whaddya think? understand my uh i dont know, metaphors?
     
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