not very good poet

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by experimenting youth, Feb 11, 2006.

  1. experimenting youth

    experimenting youth Member

    Messages:
    245
    Likes Received:
    0
    "Peace, why can't we all be peaceful
    wheather u b pacifist communist
    y do u have to be so cruel
    after all
    you're just another brick in the wall
    so pick up the phone give your best friend a call
    why are we so greedy we want diamond, gold or jewel(s)
    or u just want your car to go with fuel


    trying to get my poetry better too lol

    Drugs, are they really so bad?
    just smoke away like my old dad
    why are people so negative
    just get out there and live
    they might be enlightening
    you will be open to new thing(s)
     
  2. floyd4peace

    floyd4peace Member

    Messages:
    101
    Likes Received:
    0
    sounds totally wicked to me! :)
     
  3. experimenting youth

    experimenting youth Member

    Messages:
    245
    Likes Received:
    0
  4. DreamChaser

    DreamChaser Member

    Messages:
    47
    Likes Received:
    0
    Your poems are kind of predictable, but very clean. Keep up the good work.
     

Share This Page

  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice