I am going to find a mountain.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by useless poet, Feb 10, 2006.

  1. useless poet

    useless poet Member

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    I am going to find a mountain.
    The highest i can see.
    And i will climb upon that mountain.
    Which will look over land and sea.
    I will live upon that mountain.
    How happy i will be.
    While you will point up and laugh at me.
    And call me mad as mad may be.

    But i will be on my mountain.
    When you are under the sea.
    And you will no longer be able to point up at me.
    Calling me mad as mad maybe.
    And i will be safe on my mountain.
    Oh how happy i will be.

    So i am going to find this mountain.
    The highest that i can see.
    And i will live upon that mountain.
    While you are all under the sea.
     
  2. D. Mojo Poet

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    I've thought about escaping to a mountain top. I like the idea of looking out on the world, above the chatter. I think about a cave perhaps near the summit, and if only I could drag up there a supply of fuel and an electric generator.... I enjoyed your poem. It's such a pleasant fantasy. Thanks for posting.
     
  3. useless poet

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    thankyou for reading it,it is about global warming by the way.
     
  4. *electrica*

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    Also great.
     
  5. Happiness_First

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  6. nananie

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    it's great and very meaning full, do you belive in 2012 thing? or just global warming?
     
  7. citrus_seas

    citrus_seas Senior Member

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    I'd like for my band to put that to music...it seems like it would be a great song, and i think i could come up with a melody for that.
     
  8. useless poet

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    It would be a great pleasure citrus seas for you to put a melody to my words,anything to help to put the message across,you can drop me you email address in private messages perhaps,so i might one day be able to get a copy of what you come up with,thanks for reading too.
     
  9. nananie

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    if he can use it, can i maybe print it out or write it down and put it on my wall or something?
     
  10. useless poet

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    With pleasure,i write my poems for all to see,i am just happy that people appreciate them.
     
  11. nananie

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  12. lonners

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    Very Rad! It makes me think of something I was once told, "If mountains are problems they have all been climbed, Once there you can see further than you ever imagined" Not really anything to do with the global warming, but thats what I think about when I read it.
     

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