Nothing, Full of Springs!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ripple23, Jul 21, 2004.

  1. ripple23

    ripple23 Member

    Messages:
    156
    Likes Received:
    0
    away with all undeadly skin!
    you who do not
    resemble the morning
    must make your own clothing
    to break in with the sun


    not this but that
    words yellow promise
    (your eyes corrupt the distance)
    with a look always
    to be going
    laying the night barely visible
    through the remote
    failure of stars


    each pair of hands open towards me
    as though the proof of what cannot be known.
     
  2. Fierce_Flawless

    Fierce_Flawless Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

    Messages:
    153
    Likes Received:
    0
    beautiful should be a ten letter word, don't you think?
     
  3. ripple23

    ripple23 Member

    Messages:
    156
    Likes Received:
    0
    :) right on.
     
  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice