breathing

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by moonlight phoenix, Feb 4, 2006.

  1. moonlight phoenix

    moonlight phoenix Member

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    Feelings so soft like waves on my soul
    breathing, tossing, turning
    bringing tranquility amongst the buzzing of reality
    sometimes i just want to switch it off
    feel the silence of a thousand dreams
    cutting the shreds of life away
    and starting anew with the freshness of a beginning
     
  2. x_WaX_x

    x_WaX_x Member

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    flows so beautifully.

    i love this
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    thank you, i love this too...
     
  4. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

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  5. shryan

    shryan Member

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    i like it. it had a very calming effect on me. that was the purpose? i think.
     
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