I WISH MY LOVE My love, I wish I had your heart so I could make you hurt, the way your hurt me. My love, I wish I was your lover, so I could give you one night and leave you begging for more. I wish I were your best friend so I could tell you lies that would make you feel like shit. My love, I wish I was your God, so I could make you dissapear.But most of all, my love, I wish I was your bird, so I could sing in your ear when you want silence. THE MERMAID My leg is tired to the weight of your body, my heart is beating to the rythm of your guitar, Crazy how that hair across your face could make my body shake. Your crooked smile coming my way screaming open for business. Don't try to seduce the mermaid, I'll give you just one taste, and then pull you down, into a blissful death. THE WHORE I can take your favorite jeans and wear them more than you do. I'll take your favorite shirt and make a bikini top, I'll take your heart and build my own playground. Cruelty is what I do best, so lend me your most personal of things, let me fuck with your mind, until I'm the only thing you think about. I'll tempt you with ungodly apeal. I'll tease until you can't move.. are you ready?
LOVE that line. It is a great conclusion tothe poem, which I really enjoyed. I thought the first was the best, and then the second, and then the third. But all were good . You have a unique style, both in the structure of the poems and the wording style you choose to express them through.