Hellow, I haven't actually written poetry or actually anything other than assignments for ages... So it's probably not one of my best, but i thought i'd ask what you all thought.. A couple of oaks, hands entwined In unity, look on Over their quarters, Where the grass kisses a butterfly Low flying Like love. Three fledglings flitter fervently, Beaks touching Midst pollen breeze Where young hawthorn sways a silent song- Leaves prancing Like love. The days are old, but fresh as well. Full with life, Like love. Kind of simple, but I feel so full of an abundance of Love for far too many people and things for my own good... So I thought i'd vent some of it in a poem. Love, Sunshine Lily xxx
So filled with love you had to vent That's lovely! Like a whole little poem on it's own. The actual poem is pretty damn lovely too! I like it a lot. Great job
