Lotus

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Cloudminerva, Jan 31, 2006.

  1. Cloudminerva

    Cloudminerva Member

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    Hey, guys. Here is a new one for you. I just finished this on Friday night. Read this one slow and let everything sink in. Enjoy!




    LOTUS​






    Lotus under the full moon​

    Amid calm waters after the falling rain​

    Now the wind brings a clear night sky​

    And the embrace…​










    The Lotus…lush,




    Moist from the heat of Summer in the night​

    Rain drops like dew bead across her petals​

    As the lotus blooms, complete beauty reveals herself​


    Breathe in, sigh…​

    Naked breasts perfumed by the intoxicating scent​

    Her fingers move with the gentleness of a soft breeze across the skin​

    Moving in the shadows above me​


    The passions of nature​

    In the garden of sensations​

    The strong embrace and the soothing nectar​

    One motion, delighted in sensual bliss​


    Losing my identity, flowing into the experience surrounding me,​

    The tan blanket provides our sanction​

    The lotus blooms as my eyes catch glimpses of her unveiled body​

    I linger to stare and yearn to touch the beautiful one amid the shadows ​

    As the moon casts the glow that reveals them​

     
  2. SvgGrdnBeauty

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    Beautiful!
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Oh my, that is beautiful.
     
  4. Cloudminerva

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    Thank you, guys. I didn't expect the type to be so spread out, but I guess that it helped the effect of the poem and allowed it to sink in better! I am really glad that you like it.


    Later,
    Ben.
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Oh, your welcome.
     
  6. LostOne

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    yeah great poem man. Very sensual
     
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