some new ones i hope u guys like my shit

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mrsmorrison27, Jan 27, 2006.

  1. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

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    1.broken hearts dont mend, hungry bellies stay unfed. darkness never breaks into light. children's laughter drowns out adult sorrow cries. i am the walking dead, i am the bleeding child, i am the hungry belly, i am the screaming woman inside the little girl, looking at herself with hatred theres more blood on her wrists dripping on the floor than there is in her veins. Keep telling yourself it will be alright, your in control, you know wat ur doing..

    2.Hold on to me, dont let me fall,, this trap ive set for myself is defying me, this has now become my best friend,but it slaps me everytime i try to escape.it knows me better than i know myself. it tells me how ugly and worthless i am, it torments me by day and keeps me up at night, dont you give a shit about anyone but you? My screams to you are nothing but cravings for attention, I'll just lye back and drown in your tears of laughter.

    3.Don't fuck with me. Im too sick for you to stand, crawl inside my head and tear at my sanity, what little bit i have left, scratch away my brain, i dont need it anyway.

    4.demons rip angels wings, the world is in decay, heaven is burning, the wounds are opend and the nails placed back forever. satans angels rapping little children and killing there fathers, beauty is burned and bodies bruised and beaten. we lye in filth and rags, unaware of the horror, our eyes have been blinded by the darkness around us, we never did anything to prevent this, and now, everyone else is paying the price.

    5.please tell me im beautiful, please tell me you love me, please tell me there will never be anyone like me, please tell me im gonna be ok, dont try to make me better, but please tell me i will be. dont leave me here all alone. dont tell me you will be back, just dont leave at all. dont make me cry akk alone, dont make me feel this, all alone, I cant live this way alone, i feel so afraid and lonely, i begged you to stay, but you kissed me and said id be ok, that you would be back someday, now, you've left me here to slowly dissapear, to cry alone, now, i smoke too much, and my days smell like vodka and tears, my refrigerator is even more empty than before. I'm falling apart, I always was, but at least it was always in your arms.
     
  2. sleepy_d777

    sleepy_d777 Member

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    you're blessed to be able to express your feelings through poetry....i fear that you'd explode from all the inner chaos,if you could not. you made me feel your pain,through your words.....i want to compliment you...encourage you......but now i am too depressed and choked up..............wishing you great inner peace...(if that is what you seek)...........peace...........
     
  3. DreamChaser

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    Your own words will make you feel better than anyone else can. Keep writing them.
     
  4. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

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    ahh sorry i made u depressed, it kinda wat i do best, everytime my friends read my shit tehre like damn now im depressed lol
     
  5. DreamChaser

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    The way I see it, depression is like a reassurance of happiness, and all earthly experiences should be taken as a delight. Including having the blues.
     

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