Pop's Culture

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by pagansrule!, Jan 22, 2006.

  1. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

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    Pop’s Culture



    I have been told so often

    Since I was a little kid.

    About the “world today”

    And things that are not

    What they used to be.



    He has told me much

    About the lose of the family unit.

    Where has it gone?

    Though we are one.



    He has told me much

    About the rise of apathy.

    Does no one care anymore?

    Though we read the papers



    He has told me much

    About the decline of television.

    There’s no originality.

    Though we don’t watch much T.V.



    He is forever staring.

    Forever he is grasping

    Backwards in time.

    Mourning the death of the past.

    Shunning the birth of the future.



    He laments this future world.

    A future lacking good music.

    It all sucks!

    Though I never bother listening to it.



    I don’t know what to tell him

    When he says these things.

    Perhaps it’s simple.

    Look to your own future.



    Listen to your own music.

    Watch your own T.V.

    Read your own news.

    Raise your own family.







    Obvious?

    To some it is.

    But it’s a message

    He always likes to hear.
     
  2. TreeFiddy

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    i liked this. you didn't drown the poem in too much imagery or metaphor, the directness of it was very refreshing. the title was clever too. :)
     
  3. GirlInTheGreenGrass

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    aww whoever 'he' is, I feel like him sometimes. I liked how you ended it. It was a great message:) Thanks for sharing it.
    peace&<3
     
  4. pagansrule!

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    Well the "who" is my dad. Thanks for the praise!
     
  5. moonlight phoenix

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    I too like the simplicity
     
  6. Aurora of Oceania

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    Interesting poem. It's refreshingly modern in style, which expresses a kind of pure simplicity to convey it's meaning for the time. Well done.:)
     

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