Hold Onto the Meaning

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by GirlInTheGreenGrass, Jan 20, 2006.

  1. GirlInTheGreenGrass

    GirlInTheGreenGrass Member

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    Slow movements. Soft touches. Rain tapping. Thunder and lightning. Candlight dancing. Warm shadows unfolding. Slippery tears. Souls colliding. Twisted sheets. Heavy breathing. Looking into eachother's eyes. Exposing, revealing, exploding with meaning

    Cold hands. Confusion. Distance. Not listening. Not trusting. Judging and fighting. Draining and emptying into a place of resenting. Walls keep building.

    Apologizing. Promising. Agreeing and compromising.
    Remembering the feeling. The thunder and lightning. They are escaping. Believing. Trying to keep moving, while holding onto nothing else but meaning.


    peace&<3
     
  2. moonlight phoenix

    moonlight phoenix Member

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    that is beautiful, I especially like the last line "while holding onto nothing else but meaning"
     
  3. Don't know what to say about it, I love it.
     
  4. Aurora of Oceania

    Aurora of Oceania Member

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    This poem is very lovely. Hope to read more by you in the future.:)
     
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