vague tears in heaven

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lilylove, Jan 23, 2006.

  1. lilylove

    lilylove Member

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    Once upon a time I watched angels fly

    One was mid air and shot from the sky

    As he plummeted down I heard his sad cry

    “God has forsaken me and I know not why!”



    Hitting the ground he burst into flames

    He looked up at me and told me his name

    I am your conscience the angel of pain

    Please hold my hand close and leave me to shame



    I watched as a tear rolled down his charred cheek

    He sobbed and he shook and proceeded to speak

    “I have given it up and have ended up weak

    I’ve forgotten to live and have accepted defeat”



    As I spoke words of faith to return him to life

    He shook his head no and turned to the sky

    “I cannot believe I could not survive

    I thought that for sure I could conquer this strife”



    But the flesh it is weak and the spirit is lost

    I’d have given it up if I knew of the cost

    To lose love once had, like star lovers crossed



    Now I go to sit in my seat far in hell

    I have earned all my lashings and should have known as well

    That there’s no such thing as a buy without sell

    Souls have been sold and I bid you farewell



    His eyes rolled back in the far of his head

    I knew him and thought “what a life he has led”

    I will miss him now that he’s gone and he’s dead

    Yet I know that God knows the hearts that he fed.


    (I hate rhyming poems mine always sound so chiken soup for the soulish so I decided to write one the rhymed just for fucks sake)
     
  2. HeadCraft

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    beautiful thoughts
     
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