The Other Room

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by artemis_wolfang, Jul 19, 2004.

  1. artemis_wolfang

    artemis_wolfang Member

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    In the other room
    During spring, flowers in bloom
    My mother said to me
    "You will be what you be".

    In the other room
    The horse is ready for his groom
    The trombones are out of tune
    In the other room.
     
  2. tripRBYday

    tripRBYday Member

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    I like the random thoughts that have to do with this one room. Though some people may not understand it's beautiful in it's simplicity
     
  3. fizzy_elf

    fizzy_elf Member

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    wow, i like it alot :)


    it kinda of reminds me of a huge bustling house with loads of activity, and you are just standing there amongst it all, just observing and narrating the craziness of everything.

    trombones, horses, flowers...reminds me of a dream. rather random, but beautifully selected and distilled words into those few lines.

    :)
     

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