Bolivian rain flooding the gutters with urgent ennui, muddy brown flower petals that tumble somersaults in a chaotic trance to the curb where they plateau--stranded-- how you dance on the cobblestones and shy softly in my ears of a distant river. You hold my hand as I stand with the woman of three colors. Under her shelter the weather smells like spiny mint and her bridge of braid attracts drops and haze and her grace is a halo of exhaust and mist, and her eyes are a grey mirror beckoning you back.
what a fantastic finish... great poem girl, very good atmosphere to it, earthy... I enjoyed much! good to read some new stuff!