look what i brought to show&tell

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by gutter, Jan 2, 2006.

  1. gutter

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    i wrote this yesterday, i thought it was better than this but it is only what it is. i'd like feedback[please] i'm trying to mature as an artist

    title b

    reaching for rhyme

    'cause meanings' much too elusive
    dozen of stop signs to ignore as you driving into it
    the price of the prize you seek
    is a subtle decomposistion
    that'll lead to insainity
    conviently madness has a rythm

    but what fucks you up

    is
    you don't know what you mean
    so your reaching
    for anything that is out of reach
    knowing ,truely, you've no desite to touch
    any of those distant things

    -gutter
     
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