Alycia

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by daybell, Dec 28, 2005.

  1. daybell

    daybell Member

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    have you ever been dating but your mind keeps changing?
    are you currently in-love but another one is the dove?
    adele is your girl but alycia is your pearl.
    i cant write poems for shit.
    so this is it.
    i love you alycia.
    fuck what kelsan sais.
     
  2. daybell

    daybell Member

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    by FAR the worst poem ive ever written. it sucks pure bull crap. i hate it. two thumbs down, i cant rhyme for shit
     
  3. Imagine17

    Imagine17 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Poetry doesn't have to rhyme man, remember that. Just speak what you want to say. Worry about that first, and if you want it to rhyme worry about that afterwards because there are a million ways to say one thing. So for next time just keep in mind what you want to say and just let it flow.
     
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