Nostalgia

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by standingdeer, Dec 28, 2005.

  1. standingdeer

    standingdeer Member

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    Nostalgia


    Constant is the sound of the flute
    player
    It reminds me
    of slight variations of my child hood

    boy
    playing in the forest


    I once found a small blue bird
    its eyes closed
    nestled within a crevice of a tree
    sleeping eternally
    it imparted magic
    beauty of a still memory

    Nostalgic is the sound of the flute
    player

    I shake this day dream
    away


    standingdeer
     
  2. OceanStar

    OceanStar Member

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    Oh I just loved this. Especially the lines 'sleeping eternally, it imparted magic' Really nice imagery and a great energy in this poem.
     
  3. Imagine17

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    I agree, just an amazing poem. This was my favorite part.
     
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