so i wrote a song yesterday....my friends said it was good but they dnt understand it cuz none of em know wat the 27 curse is...and i also think they r just being nice... so i just wnt some feed back even if it isnt a good comment Another 27 Chorus Here’s a tale of a loveless man A man I knew, o so sad For days and days he wept on and on Then he discovered his baby was gone Verse 1 He had forgotten the days and nights He had spent with other men’s wives When he was lost and alone To the cat house he would go Fun had turned into crime Drug possession he did for his time (chorus) Verse 2 Night after night, show after show He followed his dream carelessly unknown So with nothing to do He strummed his guitar as it went out of tune Eyes blazed, needles and bongs Wasting away to his selfish song (chorus) Verse 3 The man I knew loveless struck Depression is an evil cult Nothing to do and nothing to see He just faded away from the rock n’ roll scene Another 27 has joined the club Wasted away with drugs ending verse (change guitar for few lines- talk nxt lines) self centered thoughts and depression taunts rockers life styles is a little nuts (guitar solo fades-end of song)
gosh this is the worst song i ever read JK. i like it partly cuz i actually no what the curse is. but owell keep writing songs and eventually ull get the perfect song.
thanks for the support. someday ill have to get something right. it just might b a song that i get right
omg i saw a poster of the 27 curse at spencers and i immediatley thought of ur song and was gonna get it for u for xmas but i paid for something else. btw was it ne good?! cuz if it was im gonna get some more from him.
