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Achievement Test

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by tpgi, Dec 22, 2005.

  1. tpgi

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    I do not achieve
    Simply based on the fact that there are simple facts I do believe
    Laughing they all dismiss me as naeve
    O look, he’s so cute and innocent you misconceive
    But I’ve been through it all
    Down to the very last hall
    To every dark corner and dirty shower stall
    And, that guy over there

    Well, he’s what we call an underachiever with ease
    Not really knowing just simply throwing harsh words as we please
    But wait, he smokes pot, he must have a disease
    Hes gotta be one of those good for nothings
    The syringe will probably be his only true wedding scene
    But,

    You over there, you are the standard overachiever
    Equipped with talking piece and ear receiver
    Model numbered 629 designed invulnerable to typhoid fever
    You thought u had it all
    But you just hit the very first wall
    Without even knowing you bounced off like a ball
    Stuck with your good ole class mates in the hall
    Laughing and dining, bragging and explaining that you know it all

    But babe, Your all is really nothing
    You gotta follow Jimmy and break on through
    Learning things you never thought to knew
    Like lyrating dilenses with quarks that bend
    Haploid chromites bonded to leptons that extend
    Even the theory of relative mechanics you had never known
    So don’t think you have it all
    No one is really that greaT
    For some reason this crazy world thinks they got it down to the vary last teeBut its clear a virtual image would prove their misdeed
    So go, take a look in the mirror in order to discover
    If what you see is truly what you want yourself to be
     
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